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This was a request that I just got around to doing but I can't for the life of me remember who requested it.
x_x;

Eh, I hope they see it. XD;
I was trying out something new with the coloring and lineart, what do you think? :3

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:iconkenveevee:
Hmm.. how to say. This pic can attracts someone to look at it at first sight with those soft colors which means it has appeal. Poeple may find this pic cute and so do i. The character and the whole pic looks little common. dreamy fantasy The anatomy of the character really look great too. However, in coloring the background and the character are little mixed but don't undo them. It looks good since there is at least lines to seperate things. The background is also suitable for this kind of character art. There are some traditional artworks which can sometimes beat some of those digital ones. Well this one at least does. Great job.
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:iconaki-hikari:
First off, I want to say what an amazing image this is. I love how you drew the Umbreon, injecting your style into the image to make him/her cute and lovable. The pose is adorable as well.

I see only a few things that could be touched up and make this an even better piece of artwork than it already is.

First off, I suggest that next time you use a ruler to make the edges straight and even. That way, it will look neater and more professional. Next, I feel that the Umbreon needs to stand out more from its background. Right now its fur color is the same exact shade as the night sky, so the attention is not focused on the Umbreon. I suggest that you either make the Umbroen's fur darker, or make the night sky darker. Also, is that Earth I see in the corner? I almost missed it the first time I viewed this picture. Maybe you could make it a little more clear by darkening its outline and coloring?

Anyways, again, very cute picture, I admire your style so much. I hope that this critique was insightful to you. Keep up the good work! ^_^
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:iconaki-hikari:
I love this. 8D

I'm gonna write a critique, m'kay? My first one... *gulp* I hope it's alright.

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:iconhtfcuddles:
Love this pic. Overcuteness.

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Uber cuteness!! I love the new style! *gets cavities again*

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:iconflameshuken:
aww it's so cute ^^ though I agree with Aki-Hikari. Needs to be darker so it stands out more :3

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:iconflameshuken:
I think your critique was perfect ;)

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:iconaki-hikari:
Thank you. ^_^ I was quite nervous when I wrote it... I usually fail at having a professional demeanor. xD;

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lol you're welcome. I strive to write like a professional with a formal setting when critiquing. But since I don't have a subby anymore I can't :( I didn't even get to make journal CSS or anything with my 3 month subby. It's why I joined the AVA in hopes to get a new tablet or at least a new subscription xD but I failed

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Waow! That's uber cute! <3

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:iconharu-dozo:
Thanks Lauren.
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Aww, thanks DT!
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